She found in her eyes
the heridity of pain
She felt in the flesh
of a dead black heart
the memory of pain
She saw in her palms
the linearity of pain
She understood
from a fallen star
the astrology of pain
She knew in the
moment of separation
the death of pain
She wrote with salt water
the anthology of pain
14 comments:
I love you and I say this for all to see,
Wld like to see you smile and happy
nice piece.
Is it merely a nice piece?
Stretch out and go for the life that calls you.
Six Degrees of Pain...Well written Parul
Dear Anonymous,
I want to know who you are before I take any advice from you.
and a poem is a poem is a poem and nothing else.
Ok!
But you could correct the typo 'seperation' without knowing who I am. Too nice a work to be seen with a typo.
Dear Editor,
Thank you
And then she meets the "The Song Fairy" :-)
my dear anonymous,
remember to drop in your name some time. I wrote two stories as a kid and then stuck to poetry. I'm never satisfied with what I write but I love the Song Fairy. May be I could find someone to illustrate it.
Which anon r u reffering to? :-) If it was the last then it is me. Else if I reply I could become an intruder :-)
that's the trouble with anonymous people...even I'm not sure...just leave your name next time even if it's a false one, I don't care
Unfortunately Blogger.com won't allow that. I am not scared of publishing my mortal coordinates but just that it requires userid to be created and i am so lazy to go through that procedure :-)
Duh! how dumb am i :-) I could type my name in the comment. Like this.
-Vikas
Vikas as in Tanu's husband?
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