tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10132220.post113639954850966594..comments2023-06-21T13:55:43.441+04:00Comments on Nothing in particular: SpotsParul Gahlothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03874507480186234320noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10132220.post-1137532078383036732006-01-18T01:07:00.000+04:002006-01-18T01:07:00.000+04:00Clever comparison of the human condition and natur...Clever comparison of the human condition and nature.mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15895749686844178804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10132220.post-1136543174795032932006-01-06T14:26:00.000+04:002006-01-06T14:26:00.000+04:00I liked it! The mocking stars especially. :-)I liked it! The mocking stars especially. :-)Innocent Bullethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11640567143543918149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10132220.post-1136463309375817442006-01-05T16:15:00.000+04:002006-01-05T16:15:00.000+04:00anshuman and d.i.: Thank you both for your insight...anshuman and d.i.: Thank you both for your insight!Parul Gahlothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03874507480186234320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10132220.post-1136461335347371022006-01-05T15:42:00.000+04:002006-01-05T15:42:00.000+04:00In the 2nd stanza, the nature of the stars' laught...In the 2nd stanza, the nature of the stars' laughter is interesting. In the first line, one might suppose they're merely laughing at the moon. But the final 2 lines suggest they also laugh at their own expense (as well as the futility of hiding): that which gives them existence (both moon & stars) is the dark night. Because of which, efforts to hide are futile. The 1st stanza though has a curious twist. The effort of the moon to hide is conventional enough in poetry: it veils itself and reveals itself in the monthly cycle. The cause (motivation) for its famous tendency to shy away from sight seems more novel: the poet identifies a cosmetic malady . . .<BR/><BR/>for 8 very short lines, there's much there. Interesting intro to your work -- thanks.<BR/>d.i.david raphael israelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16621521896693000470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-10132220.post-1136446752631267442006-01-05T11:39:00.000+04:002006-01-05T11:39:00.000+04:00Really nice. Your style has changed. From broad, m...Really nice. Your style has changed. From broad, meandering stokes on canvas to well chiselled sculptures.anshuman kishorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18247297992998109640noreply@blogger.com