Friday, September 19, 2008

Sleeping together

I close my eyes
He falls into a deep slumber
The radio sings in a low voice
His elbow touches my soft side
I sleep by the window
His face rolls away
After nearly 90 minutes
he gets up chivalourously
andI walk to the door
to get off the bus

4 comments:

Gazal said...

yes...you could say that....

love the title.

i used to doze off in buses all the time and woke up to find the co passengers grinning.

Fingers said...

lovely lovely!
:)

Does it matter said...

On the other hand, could be a perv of the type buses seem to be choc a bloc with..

Excepting his falling into a slumber, and his chivalrous walk, what is there to differentiate?

Good.

rajat said...

nice...